This rough cut has its positives however there are some things that can be improved. The time it takes for the main character is introduced needs to be shortened as it leaves the audience waiting and wondering when the main story will begin. Furthermore more close ups are needed of the main characters face to allow the audience to empathise with her and finally the final wake up shot needs to be lengthened.
Monday, 4 March 2013
Rough Cut
This rough cut has its positives however there are some things that can be improved. The time it takes for the main character is introduced needs to be shortened as it leaves the audience waiting and wondering when the main story will begin. Furthermore more close ups are needed of the main characters face to allow the audience to empathise with her and finally the final wake up shot needs to be lengthened.
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